Comments for The Parenthetical http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical A Zine for the Next Generation of Writers Thu, 12 Jan 2012 00:07:27 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 Comment on Competitive Nature by Jim Slaughter http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/age-groups/ages-14-18/competitive-nature#comment-7063 Jim Slaughter Thu, 12 Jan 2012 00:07:27 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=794#comment-7063 Very good indeed ! I am always proud of you ! JHS Very good indeed ! I am always proud of you ! JHS

]]> Comment on Competitive Nature by Patricia Slaughter http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/age-groups/ages-14-18/competitive-nature#comment-7059 Patricia Slaughter Wed, 11 Jan 2012 15:53:03 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=794#comment-7059 Haley love, You have so many talents and are admired by so many. What a beautiful story and writing is indeed a gift you need to continue to pursue. Knowing your sister well, we understand the rivalry. However, you both have your own talents. I also know that the way we become better is by helping others also. Thanks for expressing all of your talents in writing. Know you will go far in so many ways. We are proud of you. Love, Grandpat Haley love,
You have so many talents and are admired by so many. What a beautiful story and writing is indeed a gift you need to continue to pursue.
Knowing your sister well, we understand the rivalry. However, you both have your own talents. I also know that the way we become better is by helping others also.

Thanks for expressing all of your talents in writing. Know you will go far in so many ways. We are proud of you.
Love,
Grandpat

]]> Comment on Anti-Gay Bullying and the Dilemma of a LGBT High School by Ralph Ismail http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/age-groups/ages-14-18/anti-gay-bullying-and-the-dilemma-of-a-lgbt-high-school#comment-7027 Ralph Ismail Wed, 04 Jan 2012 08:53:38 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=96#comment-7027 Outstanding story there. What occurred after? Take care! Outstanding story there. What occurred after? Take care!

]]> Comment on The Blank Canvas by Nicole Taylor http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/genres/fiction/the-blank-canvas#comment-6916 Nicole Taylor Mon, 12 Dec 2011 21:12:25 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=803#comment-6916 Reagan this is Awesome!!!! I am so proud of you:-) Keep up the good work because this story is great. I could visualize everything that was happening like a movie playing in my head. Reagan this is Awesome!!!! I am so proud of you:-) Keep up the good work because this story is great. I could visualize everything that was happening like a movie playing in my head.

]]> Comment on Basma’s Story by rebecca http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/genres/fiction/basmas-story#comment-6900 rebecca Sat, 10 Dec 2011 23:23:12 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=444#comment-6900 Your story is pretty good, but I'm really excited for our story this year! Your story is pretty good, but I’m really excited for our story this year!

]]> Comment on The Cats of Epidavros by peter gren http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/genres/fiction/the-cats-of-epidavros#comment-6756 peter gren Sun, 27 Nov 2011 09:08:09 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=245#comment-6756 When I found your beautiful and compelling story (quite by accident ) I read it to my wife..We are both fanatical cat lovers and we both love to visit Epidavros,I have been there 3 times and we plan to visit again in May 2012 Your tale of the cats of Epidavros was beautiful and extremely emotional for us..and very well written Thank you so much for this experience ! Kind Regards Peter and Francesca Chelsea the Cat and Apollo our latest 9 week old kitten ! XXX When I found your beautiful and compelling story (quite by accident ) I read it to my wife..We are both fanatical cat lovers and we both love to visit Epidavros,I have been there 3 times and we plan to visit again in May 2012

Your tale of the cats of Epidavros was beautiful and extremely emotional for us..and very well written
Thank you so much for
this experience !
Kind Regards
Peter and Francesca
Chelsea the Cat and Apollo our latest 9 week old kitten !
XXX

]]> Comment on Basma’s Story by basma http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/genres/fiction/basmas-story#comment-6726 basma Wed, 23 Nov 2011 03:37:55 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=444#comment-6726 not my best story but pretty good for a 3rd rader right not my best story but pretty good for a 3rd rader right

]]> Comment on Fighting Back by Lissa Avery http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/age-groups/ages-14-18/fighting-back#comment-6717 Lissa Avery Mon, 21 Nov 2011 22:29:38 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=196#comment-6717 Sometimes a person doesn't even know they need help until they read something like this. Thanks, Lillie — for this essay and the message. I feel more courageous already. --Cordelia's mom Sometimes a person doesn’t even know they need help until they read something like this. Thanks, Lillie — for this essay and the message. I feel more courageous already.

–Cordelia’s mom

]]> Comment on Alive… Or Dead by CristinDaCrazyPersonWithoutASenseOfTimeAndSpace http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/genres/fiction/alive-or-dead#comment-6681 CristinDaCrazyPersonWithoutASenseOfTimeAndSpace Thu, 17 Nov 2011 23:09:54 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=450#comment-6681 "A muscular gorilla lifeguard was riding on some sort of rocket powered flying device. But what was really confusing was what he was doing. A twenty foot long fishing rod was in his hands, and he appeared to be fishing up a narwhal. A Lance focused on it more and more, the Narwhal appeared to be changing colors" What the... AWESOMENESS! “A muscular gorilla lifeguard was riding on some sort of rocket powered flying device. But what was really confusing was what he was doing. A twenty foot long fishing rod was in his hands, and he appeared to be fishing up a narwhal. A Lance focused on it more and more, the Narwhal appeared to be changing colors”

What the…

AWESOMENESS!

]]> Comment on Alive… Or Dead by CristinDaCrazyPersonWithoutASenseOfTimeAndSpace http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/genres/fiction/alive-or-dead#comment-6679 CristinDaCrazyPersonWithoutASenseOfTimeAndSpace Thu, 17 Nov 2011 23:02:27 +0000 http://www.writopialab.org/parenthetical/?p=450#comment-6679 This is awesomeness! (please do pardon my lame comment) This is awesomeness! (please do pardon my lame comment)

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