{"id":165,"date":"2017-08-25T15:28:25","date_gmt":"2017-08-25T19:28:25","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.writopialab.org\/writopiaspeaks\/?p=165"},"modified":"2017-09-15T15:20:29","modified_gmt":"2017-09-15T19:20:29","slug":"writopia-response","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.writopialab.org\/writopiaspeaks\/writopia-response\/","title":{"rendered":"In Response to The NYTimes"},"content":{"rendered":"<h6>By Rebecca Wallace-Segall, Danielle Sheeler, and Yael Schick<\/h6>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">As literacy curriculum developers, we enjoyed the <em>New York Times<\/em> article<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.nytimes.com\/2017\/08\/02\/education\/edlife\/writing-education-grammar-students-children.html?mcubz=0\"> \u201cWhy Kids Can\u2019t Write.\u201d<\/a><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> But we were surprised by the limited view it provided into the cultural landscape of literacy education. While the writer <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">acknowledged the importance of the synthesis of personal voice and direct grammar lessons, she profiled only educators who either resist teaching direct grammar lessons altogether <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">or, on the other extreme, who flat out reject student-centered learning that promotes joy and the development of personal vision and voice.<\/span><!--more--><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But writing education can easily combine the two approaches, imbuing lessons with the layered values of meaningful, coherent writing. What is an essay without prepositions to stand <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><i>on<\/i><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">? What are prepositions without content to hold <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><i>up<\/i><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">? What is a college essay that reveals nothing honest and moving about the writer? <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We work with hundreds of educators on bridging the gap between student-centered creative writing and a rigorous revisions process; between fiction writing and academic essay writing; between under-funded and well-resourced schools. We bring our salon-like workshop culture into the classroom and work side-by-side with educators across the country and have begun to shrink these gaps with more flexible approaches than the ones depicted in this article. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">This fall, we are working with the NYC DOE, offering a professional development class to public school teachers to help bridge these gaps. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Motivated school leaders and educators in schools like PS 276, with a highly literate student body, have been implementing this method for four years; the principal of the nearly failing school Sojourner Truth in Harlem brought us in last year to begin to reshape the school\u2019s literacy culture. We measure our impact in various ways in these schools and in many others schools throughout the New York, DC, LA, and Chicago. Nearly 100% of our writers\u2019 parents report that their children are happier since they started expressing themselves through writing. Principals report that once reluctant writers are writing enthusiastically, engaging their school assignments with more rigor. (We are waiting to see if literacy scores were improved at Sojourner this year after one year of literacy support.) At our own workshop spaces, over 75% of the parents of reluctant writers say that their kids&#8217; grades and even test scores have improved since becoming immersed in our rigorous creative writing program alone. And we are proud to report that each year an increasing number of our writers from low literacy backgrounds from across the country receive recognition from the Scholastic Writing Awards. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">We are dedicated to helping kids from all backgrounds fall in love with writing while raising their literacy levels&#8211;this pleasure should not be reserved for the privileged. Nor does it need to be.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">And the most important impact of all? Our teens, from rich and poor families with various literacy backgrounds, receive phone calls and letters from admissions officers each year thanking them for their stand out, deeply moving, or funny college essays. The end is a powerful piece of writing with personal vision and voice. A gateway to the soul. A connection between two people&#8211;and ultimately between thousands more. Enough to make an exhausted college essay reader laugh or cry&#8211;and stop and write you a \u201cthank you\u201d email. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Apparently, kids <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><i>can <\/i><\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">write. We just have to let them. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><strong>Rebecca Wallace-Segall <\/strong>founded Writopia Lab in 2007 and serves as the Executive Director.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Danielle Sheeler <\/strong>joined Writopia Lab in 2012. She is the Director of Camps and Curriculum.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Yael Schick <\/strong>joined Writopia Lab in 2012. She is the Director of Programs.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>By Rebecca Wallace-Segall, Danielle Sheeler, and Yael Schick As literacy curriculum developers, we enjoyed the New York Times article \u201cWhy Kids Can\u2019t Write.\u201d But we were surprised by the limited view it provided into the cultural landscape of literacy education. While the writer acknowledged the importance of the synthesis of personal voice and direct grammar &hellip;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":176,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_exactmetrics_skip_tracking":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_active":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_note":"","_exactmetrics_sitenote_category":0,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[7,4],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-165","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-edupolicy","category-staff-voices","entry entry-center"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.writopialab.org\/writopiaspeaks\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/08\/12_literacy.jpg?fit=640%2C480&ssl=1","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p9aRpX-2F","jetpack_likes_enabled":false,"jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":267,"url":"https:\/\/www.writopialab.org\/writopiaspeaks\/bridging-creative-and-essay-writing-for-literacy-by-milana-meytes\/","url_meta":{"origin":165,"position":0},"title":"Bridging Creative and Essay Writing for Literacy by Milana Meytes, Essay Writing Curriculum Developer","author":"Writopia Lab","date":"April 10, 2018","format":false,"excerpt":"In the era of Trump\u2019s disdain for the humanities and Secretary of Education Betsy Devos\u2019s unnerving tenure, educators are forced to defend the efficacy of the humanities, while finding new spaces and educational models for the humanities to thrive. 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